anna;; ([info]i_shiki) wrote,
@ 2007-08-11 13:14:00
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Entry tags:fandom: k-pop, fandom: super junior, pairing: shiwon/eeteuk, pairing: shiwon/hankyung

Second Choice (1/1)
pairing(s); ShiHan, ShiTeuk, mention of ShiChul
rating; R
genre; AU
word count; 829
summary; "I'm sure you won't leave here unsatisfied. His name is Hangeng. He's Chinese and he doesn't speak any Korean," Eeteuk says it all with almost perfectly masked annoyance, and Shiwon can barely keep himself from laughing out loud. Of course it would be hard to sell a whore who doesn't even know what you want him to do.
a/n; ... omg what? This is so random asdfsdfgdsgt- No, really. I just wanted some nasty!Shiwon.




"I might know what you need," Eeteuk coos, fingering the silken black choker around his slender neck. Shiwon shakes his head in annoyance.
"You know who I want."
Eeteuk pouts, calculated but undeniably sexy. His hand leaves his neck in favor of smoothing over Shiwon's arm, his fingers long and white on the expensive black material of Shiwon's suit jacket. Shiwon smirks, just a tiny bit. Eeteuk takes it as a positive sign.
"I'm really sorry, but we can't help it. Rella's sick. But," and Eeteuk leans in close, breathing the words against Shiwon's neck,"believe me, I can offer you something way better."
"Are you back in the business?" Shiwon murmurs, circling Eeteuk's slender waist with his arms. Eeteuk chuckles.
"No, I'm afraid not. But then it was never business with you," he adds, brushing Shiwon's mouth with every exhaled syllable, and Shiwon smiles despite himself. Good times, good times.
"So tell me, what do I need?"
Eeteuk's smile widens, shapes, transforms into something entirely else than smoky seduction.
"I'm sure you won't leave here unsatisfied. His name is Hangeng. He's Chinese and he doesn't speak any Korean," Eeteuk says it all with almost perfectly masked annoyance, and Shiwon can barely keep himself from laughing out loud. Of course it would be hard to sell a whore who doesn't even know what you want him to do.

Eeteuk leads him down the lowly lit corridor and Shiwon feels a pang of regret as they pass by Rella's door. Shiwon quite likes Rella - or Heechul, though he's come as far to pleading as Shiwon suspects he will ever get for Shiwon to keep his real name a secret. He's one of those exquisite but sadly ruined beauties from the country, harsh words and embarrassing dialect hiding a sharp mind, a battered but undeniably pretty doll Shiwon has come quite fond of over the past few months. Nowadays, Rella is Shiwon's Saturday night fun more often than not with his bitter tobacco kisses, sweet sweet cologne, smooth skin paler than any women's.

"I'm sure you'll adore him," Eeteuk purrs as they take a left turn and come to a stop by the second door. "He is really quite pretty and obedient."
"Which is why you couldn't sell him to anyone else. Hm, Teukie?" Shiwon laughs at Eeteuk's chagrined expression. "Don't try to play the salesman with me, you know I've been taught these tricks much sooner than you. Which reminds me, you should give my father a visit. I'm sure he would appreciate it."
Eeteuk grimaces.
"I would rather give you a visit..." he starts, one hand reaching for Shiwon's arm again, but Shiwon grasps his fingers midair between his own, squeezing non too gently.
"You forget your place, Jungsu."
Eeteuk smirks, eyes averted.
"As you wish, sir. As you wish."


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"Stand," Shiwon commands simply, the foreign syllables rolling heavy from his tongue.
Hangeng's eyes widen a friction as he pushes himself to his feet, smoothing nervous hands over his white tunic. Shiwon briefly wonders if the boy's wearing his own clothes or Eeteuk's found himself a creative outlet again. Not that it really matters; the effect is the same either way. There is something clean about his features - soft and maybe a bit plain but nonetheless attractive - his dark gaze - locked onto Shiwon's the minute Shiwon steps into the room - something open and pure that immediately makes Shiwon want to taint him.

"Come here."
And Hangeng does, gaze averted, shoulders stiff as he walks over to where Shiwon's standing, his back to the closed door. Shiwon traces light fingertips over the curve of Hangeng's cheek, his high cheekbone, down the soft line of his jaw as Shiwon tilts his chin up, looking him in the eye.
"Do you kiss?" Shiwon asks, because even if he's a nasty, perverted bastard, he's never been the kind to make his dolls uncomfortable.

Not at first and not in such a crude way, at any rate.

Shiwon smiles despite himself as Hangeng nods, looking almost shy as the corners of his mouth pull upwards.
"Good."
Hangeng tastes light and sweet, fresh on his tongue like Yinzhen. Shiwon hums appreciatively as he deepens the kiss, stroking Hangeng's black hair, his other hand sliding over the white silk covering Hangeng's back, mapping out hard muscle and the bumps of the other boy's spine. Much to Shiwon's surprise, Hangeng kisses him back with equal passion.

Their lips part wetly and for a few moments, they breathe the same hot, used air as they pant into each other's mouths harshly.
"Do you suck cock?" Shiwon whispers.

Hangeng smiles; the same shy little smile he did a few minutes ago, and gets on his knees in answer.





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[info]anyotherknight
2007-08-11 02:02 pm UTC (link)
This is so beyond brilliant, nasty!Shiwon is delicious.

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-08-12 02:06 pm UTC (link)
Nasty!Shiwon is so much mindfuck, and it's kind of hard for me to imagine him like anything but his puppy self, but that's what AU is for. ;D I'm glad you liked it!

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[info]linhxisxrisque
2007-08-11 02:21 pm UTC (link)
*giggles* Hannie is so quick to serve.

I like it. ^-^

Although, I do feel bad for Teuk. x_x

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-08-12 02:08 pm UTC (link)
Omg, if only Hannie could be bought... The world would be full of hardworking fangirls. xD

Really? I don't. *dies* I mean, he fucked himself up to the top, so now he should pay the price.

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[info]linhxisxrisque
2007-08-12 02:54 pm UTC (link)
So true. o_o To have Hannie as your own... Wow. I'd want beijing fried rice all of the time. Rofl.

>_> Well, I suppose I don't actually feel bad for him,
just a large amount of favourtism. --^;;

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[info]catnip1613
2007-08-11 04:15 pm UTC (link)
:0 you should write more. This was really good but so short! I love the way you characterize Teukie, Siwon, and Hannie. They're all so interesting with the hints of the past and the language barrier. <3 Very good.

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-08-12 02:09 pm UTC (link)
I fail at the pron, sadly. I guess it's up for grabs, it would be cool if someone who can actually write continued it. xD; Thank you!

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[info]nadesico_chan
2007-08-11 08:43 pm UTC (link)
oh my tell me you have more in store because yiu can't possibly stop things here!!!
You tease^__^

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-08-12 02:10 pm UTC (link)
I fail, I know. D= I might continue when I'm really drunk and don't have any shame left in the mood. 8D

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[info]clicheterms
2007-08-11 11:11 pm UTC (link)
wonnie doesn't seem too disappointed ;D

oh han♥

<3 tiffo

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-08-12 02:10 pm UTC (link)
You know, make do and all that... ;D

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[info]deftonsita
2007-08-12 02:22 am UTC (link)
omg!! i want to read more! T_T!!

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-08-12 02:11 pm UTC (link)
*flails* Sorry, can't promise I'll continue this. ^^;

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[info]kenshinjunkie03
2007-08-12 05:11 am UTC (link)
do you know the bad thing about you? even if i'm not that fond of the pairing, all i have to see is that you wrote it, and i'll read it. and enjoy it. kinda interesting place to cut it off there, isn't it? but i love eeteuk in this one^^

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-08-12 02:14 pm UTC (link)
Omg xD You're not good for my ego, you know. <333

Hmm, slut!Teuk is... hmmm....~~~ <33333333

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[info]nikki_dark
2007-08-12 09:23 am UTC (link)
TwT really good i can only imagen shiwon's smile
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[info]sugarless_666
2007-08-12 02:14 pm UTC (link)
Shiwon's nasty smile would be lovely... Not that his puppy!grin isn't. 8D

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[info]mimei
2007-08-12 12:15 pm UTC (link)
He's one of those exquisite but sadly ruined beauties from the country, harsh words and embarrassing dialect hiding a sharp mind
perfect.

and i love how you wrote Shiwon. is it really finished? ;__; what is this "1/1" mocking me :C

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-08-12 02:17 pm UTC (link)
I'm afraid I watched No Regret one too many times. 8D Jesus, that movie's on some serious crack and yet... Korean male whores ftw 8D

Omg, idek! =< I wanted to continue, but the pron came off corny, and then Heechul wanted to be in it, and then Hannie didn't and sajdkjskrew You could totally go on with this. *pokes*


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[info]mimei
2007-08-13 09:21 am UTC (link)
*pets* ^^ i rewatched that in my internetless period. it was better the second time, i think, maybe because i wasn't overthinking the whole thing >:x

:3 tricksy. I'd love to but I really don't think I could...me & fandom AUs = fail-in-an-i-just-can't-write-it sorta way :x *pokes back* make [info]out_of_words24 do it 8D!! ♥~

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[info]elvenyounglett
2007-08-12 10:03 pm UTC (link)
ashglsdbglsdhglhsdlvn!!!

Your Shiwon here is *amazing* Actually, I love all of your characters in this story: there is a really nice dark feel to this.

And ha at the ending xD

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-08-14 07:59 am UTC (link)
Yay, thank you! 8D And yes, HA. God, I fail at ending things... xD;

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[info]elvenyounglett
2007-08-14 03:26 pm UTC (link)
Aww I like your endings though :)

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[info]out_of_words24
2007-08-13 03:01 am UTC (link)
I loved nasty!Siwon, he is hot =D Also, I love the idea of this, and I really want to do a hooker!fic, maybe a DBSK/SuJu crossover, so would it be okay if I sort of expanded on your idea?

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-08-14 08:00 am UTC (link)
Yaaay, that would be great! I like your style and I feel sort of sorry for this idea, getting lost in my inability to write smut. xD;

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[info]out_of_words24
2007-08-14 08:19 am UTC (link)
Ooh thank you so much! Though I fail at writing smut, too, I've never actually written smut so I don't know how much I can do for this idea either -wilts- Still, I'll try my best to do it justice!

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[info]bunni_chan
2008-06-04 09:52 pm UTC (link)
Did you write a fic like this yet?
If you did, mind giving me the link?
I am seriously desperate for a hooker!suju/dbsk :]~

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[info]out_of_words24
2008-06-05 04:56 am UTC (link)
A bunch of us did, actually! Here : http://community.livejournal.com/shiwon_tops_all/profile

Pick your poison XD

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[info]bunni_chan
2008-06-05 09:03 pm UTC (link)
You have no idea how much I love you right now :D!

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[info]twighlight [lostjournal.com]
2007-08-20 11:22 pm UTC (link)
Teuk is.. suchaslut *shakes head*
Nasty Won is so much fun to play with though *is obviously just mean to nice christian boys* ;D

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-08-23 07:32 pm UTC (link)
Hyukjae, Shiwon, Kyuhyun, Junsu... the first thing they make me think of is prude Christianism, really. Sluts, all of them. <333

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[info]blurmeese
2007-12-31 05:18 am UTC (link)
*flails* hullo there, just joined the comm and omo I can't believe I missed out on the hooker!verse. :O I love your writing style, it's really sensuous and oh screw it all, I just want to see all the boys as nice pretty hookers. Gah. *goes off to read everything else in the comm*

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[info]whitefoxbuns
2008-01-02 03:21 am UTC (link)
oh *fanself* giggles...shiwon and hangeng....i feel like i died a little inside when it stopped...i think i went like a tomato and shiwon asked the last question and Hangeng gave his shy smile....more frunken giggles...

I luv hooker fic~~~~~~~*___*

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[info]zroya
2009-05-26 02:15 am UTC (link)
Oh. o.O Wow. It's... hot *u*

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