anna;; ([info]i_shiki) wrote,
@ 2007-08-23 19:31:00
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Entry tags:fandom: csjh the grace, fandom: k-pop, fandom: super junior

Second Choice; Part 2
Title: Second Choice
Pairing(s): various
Genre: h0r!fic AU
Rating: R
Word Count: 548
Summary: Heechul knows, even without Eeteuk telling him, even before Jaejoong could tease him about it.
A/N: ... erm. I sort of swore to myself I would stop with the hooker!fic, because, you know. It sort of makes me blush and squirm and feel funny, and me and smut aren't all that compatible in the first place. But then [info]sugarfrosting wrote a sequel/companion piece and I just had to.

Previously: Second Choice; Part 1
If you like this, you might also want to check out [info]sugarfrosting's Learning, which is mainly DBSK but written in the same universe.




Kangin, he says his name is, though Eeteuk doubts it. He's a cute kid, really, what with all the little gifts and puppyish determination. He comes around every Friday night, and he never chooses. Or maybe he does; chooses to stare at Eeteuk instead playing with the babies, and Eeteuk feels sort of flattered (because he is not that young, not that pretty, not that anything) and sort of annoyed by the whole thing. You can't buy me, Eeteuk would say, smiling, and Kangin would shake his head, I don't want to buy you - look, why - this is not like that - , and then Eeteuk would laugh, cold to his own ears, Kangin-sshi, he would coo, it is either just like that, or nothing at all.

--

Heechul knows, even without Eeteuk telling him, even before Jaejoong could tease him about it. Even if the Chinese kid weren't looking at him so strangely whenever they pass by each other in the corridor, Heechul would know, because Shiwon used to fuck him like it was the most natural thing in the world, like they somehow belonged together in a battered, retarded way, like how Heechul is capable of belonging to anyone.

Now, Shiwon fucks him like it's one of his many pastime activities, like it doesn't matter, like he doesn't particularly care if Heechul leaves red welts on the skin of his back, trails of passion in the wake of his fingernails. Shiwon fucks differently, speaks differently, smiles differently, and he also smells different - Heechul knows that scent, white tea, Chinese, the best kind, and oh, how he loathes it.

--

She's called Stephanie, she's half-American, barely eighteen and a real slut if Shiwon's ever seen one. I don't care who you fuck, his father tells him, you are marrying her. And that's about that.

They are left alone around midnight, finally, her parents in one of the guest rooms, his in their own suit. She lights up then, exhales smoke slowly, red lips pursed, tainting the pristine white paper, and Shiwon examines her rings, silver and diamonds and one that looks cheap and actually real.

So, you gay? she asks then, and Shiwon huffs a laugh, surprised, caught off guard for once. Look, I don't care, she tells him, I don't care about your dick or your money, we'll manage somehow, right?

Stephanie smirks, she has nice teeth and feral eyes, and Shiwon knows, then - she is just his kind of woman, and they will be great together, even if producing an heir ought to be an awkward experience for both parties.

--

Do you love her? Hangeng asks, panting, and Shiwon laughs, thrusts into him deeper, turned on as fuck by such blatant displays of naivete.
It's arranged.
Oh, Hangeng says, oh and he comes, white and hot between their stomachs, arching beautifully.

--

Boa asks, where's all the cash from? and Heechul slaps the back of her head lightly, ruffles her hair like he always does. Watch the satoori, kid, he tells her, because they are in the city now, Boa goes to college and Heechul would make sure he wouldn't fuck this up, this one pathetic little chance they've got.







EDIT: I switched Donghae to Boa in the last part, because [info]out_of_words24's already mentioned Donghae before me (twice *dies*) and I managed to create a contradiction by writing him in this.





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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-08-23 06:22 pm UTC (link)
I really hope you two keep inspiring each other to write hooker!fic, because it's so good. I love the addition of jaded!Stephanie and earnest!Kangin, and I of course adore nasty!Shiwon and hooker-with-a-heart-of-gold!Heechul. Excellent fic.

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-08-26 09:46 pm UTC (link)
I'm glad you enjoy it, thank you! Honestly, we have no idea where this is going, but it's too much fun to stop now. 8D

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[info]tongzhiai
2007-08-23 06:53 pm UTC (link)
You know, can't remember if I said anything to the previous fic. Maybe I did, maybe I didn't, but regardless, I read it and loved it, even though it felt ten sorts of wrong. And I'm not saying that as a criticism, I'm sure you know how odd it feels as you mention squirming when writing this yourself.

BUT as wrong as it feels, I just ..love it. KangTeuk (ohgod Kangin ♥) and ShiHan and possessive!Heechul and just, guhhh.

I want these to be longer, to be honest. And not necessarily for more porn, even.

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-08-26 09:49 pm UTC (link)
This whole thing is way beyond "wrong". *dies* But, you know. It's just innocent fun, and also an opportunity to characterize differently than how I would in a "normal" Suju fic. Because nasty!Shiwon in a realistic fic would be just absurd, at least to me.

Ah, I also wish I could write long. =/ In the end, I'm just a hopeless short story writer.

♥!

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[info]clicheterms
2007-08-23 07:54 pm UTC (link)
i really love all the different relationships in here, and how they all connect, somehow.
You can't buy me, Eeteuk would say, smiling, and Kangin would shake his head, I don't want to buy you - look, why - this is not like that -
teukie has no faith.

Donghae goes to college and Heechul would make sure he wouldn't fuck this up, this one pathetic little chance they've got.
oh chul♥

a few typos:
chooses to stare at Eeteuk instead playing with the babies
&
even if producing an hire



<3 tiffo

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-08-26 09:50 pm UTC (link)
Yay, typos! Thank you!

Teukie is fucked up beyond repair. I guess. But maybe Kangin could do something about that...

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[info]helzfyah
2007-08-23 11:14 pm UTC (link)
Oh - i love this. i love all the intricacies and relationships. Especially seeing as how its prostitiution after all. No one thinks that prostitutes can care about anyone, or vice versa - but they can get hurt too. Love it.

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-08-26 09:52 pm UTC (link)
It's just a job, and they aren't all that different from "normal" people. Maybe it's because I do know prostitutes, but I totally can't judge them. Sex is sex, money is money... *shrugs*

Anyway, I'm glad you like it! ;)

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[info]out_of_words24
2007-08-24 06:06 am UTC (link)
this is so good, and, just, you make me want to write more, damnit -dies-

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-08-26 09:53 pm UTC (link)
YOU TLY NEED TO WRITE MORE! 8D

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[info]tokawaii
2007-08-24 06:18 am UTC (link)
Oh snap. I hope there is more to this...it's much to delicious to let go of. =P

Bravo to another one. :)

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-08-26 09:53 pm UTC (link)
There are so many possible combinations we haven't tried yet... xDv

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[info]mimei
2007-08-24 10:51 am UTC (link)
oh, rella.

if i put Stephanie in an AU she'd probably stay a tomboy XD;;; but i like the way you matched her and Shiwon up, and of course i still like somewhatnasty!Wonnie.

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-08-26 09:56 pm UTC (link)
I think Steph could play this role better than the other girls. I mean, I tried to imagine Sunday as an ice queen, and even the thought cracked me up. Or Dana... eh. xD;

=) ♥!

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[info]mimei
2007-08-27 01:05 am UTC (link)
XD that's a good point.

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[info]hoyah
2007-08-25 09:36 pm UTC (link)
8D i want to join in on this series

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-08-26 09:19 pm UTC (link)
xDDD Be my guest!

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[info]hoyah
2007-08-26 09:22 pm UTC (link)
xD *kind of contributed?* 8D but i didn't ralize kibum was already a character

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-08-26 09:24 pm UTC (link)
*takes double take* You did! Geez, I disappear for a day... Anyway, wait, Kibum? I certainly didn't know about him. >.>"

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[info]hoyah
2007-08-26 09:28 pm UTC (link)
xD He was mentioned in two lines. He approved ChangMin. That was about it. I missed it, then went back and was like "whoops~"

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-08-26 09:31 pm UTC (link)
Oh! I didn't remember that part, but now that you mention it... *confused like whoa at this point*

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[info]hoyah
2007-08-26 09:35 pm UTC (link)
xD It's okay! 8D there can be two kibums. maybe they just have the same name, but are different people!

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-08-26 09:44 pm UTC (link)
... what?? xDDD Idek, you two talk that out. I haven't mentioned Kibum yet.

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[info]hoyah
2007-08-26 09:45 pm UTC (link)
xD but i don't know how to talk to people... xD we'll just go with wahtever works. i'm glad you liked my kibum, though!

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[info]wings_strength9
2007-12-09 04:14 am UTC (link)
even though this is a crack fic, i can't help but love it XD

oh kangin, hes too cute XD

and the SHIHAN OH GAWD THE SHIHAN.

Do you love her? Hangeng asks, panting, and Shiwon laughs, thrusts into him deeper, turned on as fuck by such blatant displays of naivete.

they fit so well together, and in this one their personalities are completly opposite, but it works, and its gorgeous, and kind sad T.T

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[info]blurmeese
2007-12-31 05:33 am UTC (link)
Ohhh hooker!verse is really drawing me in like woah. I ain't no SuJu fangirl but I;m making an exception for this whee~ Everyone's interaction is great here and I need to read moar moar moar NOW. *toddles off to the next fic*

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[info]whitefoxbuns
2008-01-02 03:58 am UTC (link)
oh this is like asian food to me~~~ sorry wrong metaphor, i just really love asian foods :) Rella is so wicked, bloody wicked, sick and AWESOME!! ah i love character like him, makes my brain stimulate. Shiwon, he is such a "slut" gosh....I LOVE SHIHAN. Hankyung can't seem to leave those images, he will always be the beautiful, innocent, shy chinese pretty boy :) cheese

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[info]zroya
2009-05-26 04:03 pm UTC (link)
wow, that stephanie girl sure can handle the situation XD
oh that last part was funny and lovely (: but didn't quite understand it XD i get the picture, though.

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