anna;; ([info]i_shiki) wrote,
@ 2007-10-05 06:22:00
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Entry tags:fandom: k-pop, fandom: super junior, pairing: donghae/eunhyuk

title: they'd tell it all
pairing(s): Donghae/Hyukjae, implied Hyukjae/Junsu + Yunho/Donghae + Hyukjae/Junsu/Donghae
rating: R
word count: strangely, exactly as much as the first part's; 472. IT'S A SIGN. 8D
a/n: you know If Walls Could Talk, [info]halcyon_morn's awesome fic you just read? yeah, lame sequel-like thingy here.



At the sound of the front door closing, Hyukjae stands from the bed, pushing a careful hand through Junsu's sweaty locks to make sure he's well and truly asleep. Junsu nuzzles into the touch with a soft murmur, an unconscious little sigh on his lips.

Hyukjae smiles, leaning down to rummage among the bundle of clothes littering the floor. After a brief struggle, he manages to untangle Junsu's jeans from the pile. He tugs them on carelessly, not even bothering to button up. He's sure Junsu won't mind. After all, what he doesn't know, he cannot complain about.

When Hyukjae pushes the door open, Donghae is lounging on his bed, naked as the day he was born. His eyes are heavy with what Hyukjae recognizes as the satisfaction of the well-fucked, his hair and the bedsheets a mess Hyukjae wouldn't mind messing up further.

Donghae runs his gaze over Hyukjae's body, smirking slowly as his eyes come to a stop on his undone zipper. Hyukjae smiles back, one eyebrow cocked teasingly.

"Come here." Donghae's voice is husky, low; it sends a delicious shiver down Hyukjae's spine. He walks over and sits on the bed (the one in which Yunho just fucked his Donghae--Hyukjae wishes the thought disturbed him a tad bit more than it apparently does). Donghae, still not bothering to get up, takes his hand, intertwining their fingers on his bare hip. "Did you have fun?"

Hyukjae nods, too busy admiring the hot, slightly damp texture of Donghae's skin where his knuckles rest to say more. Donghae's smirk widens, his gaze a wicked, shining thing. "You sounded so fucking hot."

"So did you," Hyukjae murmurs, climbing on the bed fully, throwing a leg over Donghae's body. Donghae hisses, his grip tightening on Hyukjae's fingers as Hyukjae straddles his hips, the rough, cool texture of denim brushing against his oversensitized skin. Noting his reaction, Hyukjae wriggles his ass experimentally, delighting in Donghae's answering gasp and the way he arches his back off the bed, baring his throat, completely unselfconscious.

"Junsu's still in my room, you know," Hyukjae tells him conversationally, wrapping a light hand around Donghae's rapidly hardening cock.

"Jesus, you kill me," Donghae chokes out, thrusting into Hyukjae's too-soft touch like a starving man.

Hyukjae smirks, leaning in to bite at Donghae's chin lightly, the tip of his tongue soothing the sting. "You'll have to be more quiet than that. He's sleeping. It would be a shame if we woke him."

"Now would it really?" Donghae ponders, grasping at Hyukjae's hips with both hands to still him.

They share an amused glance.

"I love your mind," Hyukjae whispers, kissing Donghae on the cheek lovingly. "I'll be just a moment," he adds, pushing up from the bed, almost managing to fall over the edge in his haste. "Oh, and Hae?"

"Yeah?"

"Open a window while I'm gone? Frankly, this place reeks."






okay, why is it that my sequels never FINISH anything? ashadgashgd





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[info]hoyah
2007-10-05 04:55 am UTC (link)
xD this is so so amusing

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-10-05 05:02 am UTC (link)
I laughed my ass off on the first part, and now I just had to add to the crack. xD Poor unsuspecting Su...

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-10-05 04:56 am UTC (link)
HYUKJAE IN JUNSU'S UNZIPPED JEANS STRADLING A NAKED WELL-FUCKED DONGHAE IN A ROOM THAT REEKS OF YUNHAE SEX = MY NEW FAVORITE IMAGE. ♥

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-10-05 05:01 am UTC (link)
FRANKLY, I DOUBT HYUKIE HAS THE SMOOTH FOR THAT, BUT IT MAKES A LOVELY IMAGE, DOESN'T IT? 8D

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-10-05 05:09 am UTC (link)
No, probably not. He's a goof. But maybe he could be smooth? I'll suspend disbelief. :D

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-10-05 05:12 am UTC (link)
I don't know what's wrong with Hyukjae, really. Because there are the hips. And the fact that he's BFF with Junsu. And his Don't Don outfit is hot. All things considered, he could be totally smooth. And yet he just... isn't. It puzzles me.

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-10-05 05:16 am UTC (link)
It's because he's goofy. And it totally works for me, even better than if he were smooth. Why am I on such a Hyukjae high recently? Like, look at his smile. It is the opposite of sexy. It precludes all smoothness. And yes it is PERFECTION TO ME.

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-10-05 05:04 am UTC (link)
Oh, I found the clip! Did you watch it? It's in the making of School of Rock. xD

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-10-05 05:08 am UTC (link)
I just saw that you found it now! I'm about to watch it! *does excited dance*

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[info]out_of_words24
2007-10-05 05:26 am UTC (link)
jasfhaksfkash AND YOU MAKE ME WANT TO WRITE A PR0NY SEQUEL TO THIS WHY. YOU PEOPLE ARE SO BAD FOR MY NO MINDLESS PR0N ETHIC.

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-10-05 05:30 am UTC (link)
YOU KNOW IT IS YOUR TURN. DON'T EVEN TRY TO SIDDLE OUT OF THIS. TEAM SPIRIT, PRISSY, TEAM SPIRIT!

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[info]out_of_words24
2007-10-05 05:36 am UTC (link)
I HATE YOU ALL.

ALSO, I AM BAD AT THE SMUT. JUST SAYING.

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[info]halcyon_morn
2007-10-05 06:20 am UTC (link)
AND I AM JUST SAYING, ARE YOU A TEAM PLAYER, PRISSY? BECAUSE EVERYONE LIKES A TEAM PLAYER.

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[info]out_of_words24
2007-10-05 06:23 am UTC (link)
HAHAHA APPARENTLY I AM, BECAUSE I AM ALMOST DONE WITH IT. GOD, SRSLY.

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[info]jaded_skys
2007-10-05 06:25 am UTC (link)
AHJDHFJHSDHJDSHJDHJHSDFHSDFHSK~~~

Hyukhae pwnz me. Hyukhae!rampant!kinky!sex KILLS ME IN OH SO RIGHT A WAY~

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-10-05 06:36 am UTC (link)
HYUKHAE PWNZ US ALL. FIRST LJ, NEXT THE WORLD. 8D

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[info]jaded_skys
2007-10-05 06:40 am UTC (link)
WIN! WIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIN~! I'm hoping there will be more of this story?? it hardly seems finished. *waggles eyebrows*

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-10-05 06:41 am UTC (link)
Prissy says she's almost finished with it. So watch out for [info]sugarfrosting. 8D

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[info]sugarless_666
2007-10-05 06:42 am UTC (link)
Okay, it's posted. *slow* 8D

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[info]tiatza
2007-10-05 07:09 am UTC (link)
must... breathe... *inhales deeply*

OMGWTFBRAINWORKINGNOT

they're sluts, all of them (but yunho less because we all know that hyuk, hae, and su are SO going to have sex while he's not there).

but still, this was amazingly hot. and now...

*rushes off to go read next part*

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[info]wmelon_kaiye
2007-10-05 07:24 am UTC (link)
x33333


Oh that was the smex! D=

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[info]ryou_no_baka
2007-10-05 12:29 pm UTC (link)
yay...
Okay it doesn't finish it in this sense but it left another very interesting opening XD
I like how you wrote this...
I adored the first part but your sequel is adorable too... it shows the love between Donghae and Hyukkie although they share their beds with Junsu and Yunho from time to time...

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[info]fxckinmyway
2007-10-05 12:47 pm UTC (link)
OMG THESE HORNY LITTLE FUCK BUNNIES. ♥

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[info]baeby_bloo_skys
2007-10-07 07:41 am UTC (link)
You should have finished it! I'm sure it would be tres hot :D

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[info]inny_cent
2008-07-13 04:24 pm UTC (link)
^______________^

Teehehehee~ <3 That was hot again. Oh my.
Yunho LOL AND HYUKJAE IN SU'S UNZIPPED JEANS!?! -faints-

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